my class has been learning about a narrative.We got to pick out of four pictures.This is what you need in a narrative, you need a title,problem ,introduce the people what they look like,what they do and what they like and dislike. I love doing these because it was really fun,I wish I could do narratives everyday.I loved making them cause we can make anything up.My next step is to add punctuation into my writing because I forgot to.
Have you ever made a narrative before?
Was it hard?
The mirror!
One day there were two best friends that went for a walk and saw this creepy mansion Claudia is ten and Olive is twelve, Olive has long brown hair and eyes as green as leaves. Claudia has short blonde hair and hazel coloured eyes. Olive did not bother going in there so she left but Claudia wanted to go in...so she did!
Claudia decided it would be fun to explore the creepy mansion. ̈ ̈ Don't be afraid̈ ̈ I said as I took one huge step forwards into the mansion. When Claudia looked around to make sure she was absolutely safe. Then she decided to look around but she went through a door that led to a creepy horrifying hallway ̈ this is scarier than I thought ̈ so she saw every door and thought which door to go in,she picked the one on the right.
But what she didn't know was that there was a locked door straight ahead of her,there was nothing in the right door so she finally saw the locked door,at the same time she saw it she knew there was something or someone in there, she kicked as hard as she could Bash!
The door opened,it was a bathroom filled with mirror ladies she looked straight into my eyes,she was horrified Claudia heard the front door open it was the doll it came closer and cornered Claudia ́ help ̈ she said ̈is that you Olive? ¨ It was Olive, she kicked and wacked the bad people and Olive and Claudia ran for their life and never went back…
this is mine:)