Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 4 May 2020
Loving,
That's why I made a poem for my mum This is what I got.........
Mom!
Awesome
Nice
Grateful
Excellent
Loving
Amazing
This was my mum's:))
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora, Aimee this is Scarlett from New Brighton Catholic School.
ReplyDeleteI really like your post on your poem for your mum it was really special.
I Like the way you set it out and the words you used.
Are you going to put this in a card for mothers day?
I can not wait to see your next post.
Hello Scarlet t thank you for commenting kn my blog it makes me really happy to see people commenting on my blog when my mum saw it she was very happy have you ever done one of these? they are really kind to do because your not just writing about someone and doing a poem your also giving them complements:)
Deletetena koe e hoa Amiee,
ReplyDeleteit's Emily from New Brighton Catholic School, I think this is super sweet, and it will light your mums face up when she see's this!, I love how you personalised it by putting your mums name in there, it will mean alot,next time do a WALT and a question, but overall I think she will love it!!
this took me back to when I showed my mother this! it made her so happy, so I hope it makes yours happy too.
Emily