WALT: Use adjectives.
Today we had to write a story about this strange image:
its a very strange photo, so we had to use adjectives and create a story about his way to get up there, I have created a story, Lets be honest I don't think giraffe's can climb.
What do you know about giraffe's? Have You Learnt Anything?
Story: Strength
The bare struggles reach within, not giving up. The hooves almost slip, but he held on, tight. He has wanted to experience some other animal stances, but it was tricky. Although, even though it was hard. He did not give up! After climbing he met some intense vines looping the tree. He kept going, not knowing one thing. The vines were dry, also VERY spiky.
He felt extraordinarily pain, crawling down his arm. He made it too the top. But ended up tottering about half way, terrifically he gave up. And became a koala. Lets be honest, for a few seconds before the tree branch snapped...
Hi Aimee
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic story. I also find this picture strange, but it also make me laugh. You have used some good adjectives in your story, well done. I don't know much about Giraffes, but I have fed one at Orana Park. Have you fed the Giraffes at Orana Park?
Sarah