Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 18 May 2020
My Duffy books:)
My Duffy books are called.....
I survived (the shark attack) I think this book is going to be a shark the some how came to the city and attacked people.
The babysitter club (Mary Anne saves the day) Mary Anne saved the day by helping someone out.
Here's a picture of what they look like!
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Cool books! I love graphic novels, I hope the shark doesn't get to the city. You have made sure you have included a WALT and DLO. Next time you could ask a question. Which one are you looking forward to reading the most?
ReplyDeleteHello Mr Gray thank you for commenting on my blog and giving me amazing feedback I will definitely add a question next time:)
DeleteAimee,
That will be good Aimee. Your books are very different, which one do you think you will read first and why?
DeleteHello Aimee this is amazing, I really like your books. Why do you like there's books?
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