Walt: Use Alliteration.
we have been learning about alliteration.
Today we had to create a story with at least one alliteration.
alliteration is 3 starter words all with the first same letter
for an example: I surfed intense salty sea water.
what do you love most about writing?📜
We had 15 minutes, here is my piece of writing:
That Yellow Loner
One shivering night me and my friends
went for a drive to a very quiet town,
its like no one has been there since the
80´s if we have to describe it. It was so grotty with
strangled pillars wrapped with intense vines.
I was going to turn back then my friends encouraged me to keep going,
we stopped at a country court house thinking someone was in there,
but to our surprise when we came out we saw wild animals with wicked driving skills,
wrestling down the road. I thought to myself that they have very wonderful wipe-outs,
while they were wrestling nonstop..
Hi Aimee
ReplyDeleteI really like your piece of writing, especially the 'wonderful wipe-outs', great use of alliteration. Well done for keeping up to date with your blog posts.
Sarah
Hello Aimee,i like how you added good punctuation and effort towards your post.this reminded me of when I did this as well yesterday and learnt about alliteration, next time you could add a picture so we could understand the meaning about your writing. what was your favourite part about this writing?
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